| Archive for Body and Pole Help and advice for pole dancers from complete beginners to professional dancers and teachers |
| suzysafloozy |
Hearts N Poleabout time eh!www.hearts-n-pole.com have a nosey for any spelling mistakes and tel me what you think?? thankyou 
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| Fairey |
Ooh looks nice and fresh babe.
You asked for spelling mistakes etc so here are the ones I've noticed: FAQs - "jogging bottoms are okay to being with" rather than begin. "Jewelery should be taken of" instead of off. "you make like to" - you should be capitalised i.e. You.. Gallery won't load for me but that's probably my crappy laptop
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| Jamie |
I didnt see a phone number anywhere. |
| suzysafloozy |
thats just cos i havent got a seperate one yet. its on its way but its vodafone..cud be months! |
| Jamie |
Why a separate one? |
| suzysafloozy |
because unfortunately pole dancing has the tendency to attract certain people that i dont want to have my personal mobile number. hunny had a stalker for example and i think Genevive said that she had nuisance calls |
| Jamie |
Aaaah I seee.
All I seem to get is people who listen to the answermachine but leave no message. God that annoys me, LOL |
| LoopyJitterBug |
Looks fab!
homepage - "it's" should be "Its" (2nd paragraph) When you put "Heart 'N' Pole" in the text you might want to make sure that you always write the 'N' as it is in the title. In the text it currently says Heart N Pole - just thought it'd be good to go one way or the other rather than mix and match. FAQ's - 'private lessons will be structured so "that" you' (it does work without but I feel it'd read better with "that" in there. Apart from the stray apostrophe on the homepage I didn't spot anything that was wrong, just those ^ ^ that might want to be slightly edited. It looks cool though! |
| spikeygoodness |
I love the pink, very girlie!
In the FAQ section, jewelery needs an extra l, and in the same same section "i would recommend" the i needs to be capitalized. Under "Is Pole Dancing Difficult?" there needs to be a full stop at the end of the sentence. Like it lots though.x |
| Bubble |
In the FAQ section, your fonts are different sizes.
I couldn't get into the gallery either. |
| Kat |
I really like it 
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| suzysafloozy |
thankyou everyone
should all be changed now, including phone number! xx |
| LoopyJitterBug |
yey!!
Tis all go now! |
| Nicola |
Fantastic lady, well done xxx
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